Aaron and Paula in the Park

Well, since non-premium members can finally write a critique, here goes nothing!

I'd say that the main subject is very well portrayed and shows, not much on originality, but more on dynamics and simplicity. I love both of their expressions and overall this shows great technique and perspective. I love the fact that you've placed a foreground to this piece and the butterfly adds to the mood of the scene. I also love the flowers, but maybe you should also scatter them around the park. I love the background too, it seems that you've put a lot of time to work on those trees, especially that little pattern on the leaves, well...until it ended up to be just coloured lines in the BG. To be honest, that little forest that you've placed at the back, is a bit distracting, maybe in colour choice or in the shade of colour. The city at the back is not that detailed, but it fits in a way. It makes you focus more on the subject, which is Aaron and Paula. Maybe also add a curve on the BG trees to make it, well curve instead of it being arranged in a straight line, the problem for me with the BG is that it looks a bit flat compared to the other parts of the piece.

Overall, not the most unique piece I've seen, but it's well executed and has a great perspective. I especially would like to commend you on your great job with Aaron and Paula. It's very hard to sketch scenes like this, so I'd also want to commend you on how you managed to make this scene look amazing.

In my opinion, this is ONE of the best I've seen you do, but I know you can do better. Right now, you're a good cartoonist. And, with a little more practice and maybe more attention to how things look like in reality, you will be a great cartoonist.